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Write as much as possible in English to answer the following question.

Why do you think virtual pets, for example, Tamagocchi, Aibo and Furby, have been so popular in Japan recently? Give three reasons.

ガチ即興 (before)

I have three reasons for this question.

One reason is that virtual pets are easir to take care of than real pets.

All owner of virtual pets have to give them is electronic resorce.

Basically, there is responsibility to own pets.

Owner have to take care of pets a lot, clear up fur, and so on.

This is the reason why some people avoid owning pets.

Virtual pets solve these problems. 

 

Second reason is that vertual pets can be owened by people who have aragy against real pets.

I have aragy of dog and cat, so I can not own them although I feel like that they are cute.

Yet, I can own virtual pets. Their moving looks cute as well as real pets.

It is enough for people who have aragy to own virtual pets.

 

Third reason is that always people like new wave of innovation.

 Viertual pets are , as it were, innovation from the view of pet.

Virtual pets are realy in now, and this is most correct reason why virtual pets are so popler.

I forecast boom of virtual pets would decrease in two years.

 

 修正後(after)

In my opinion there are three resons for why virtual pets are popular .

One reason is that virtual pets are easir to take care of than real pets.

All things owner of virtual pets have to give them is electricity.

Basically, to have a pet is accompanied by responsibility.

Owner have to feed pets , clear up fur, and so on.

This is the reason why some people avoid having pets.

Virtual pets solve these problems. 

 

Second reason is that people who have allergy to real pets
also can have virtual pets.

I have allergy to dogs and cats, so I can not have them although I feel like that they are cute.

Yet, I can have virtual pets. Their behavior look cute as well as living pets.


Virtual pets make people who are allergic satisfied.
 

Third reason is that people always like new wave of innovation.

 Viertual pets are ,so to speak, innovation from the viewpoint of pet.

Virtual pets are realy in fashion now.
This is most persuasive reason why virtual pets are populer.

I forecast boom of virtual pets would decrease in two years.